99. EMILY DICKINSON: A bird came down the walk

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  1. Gabby
    Gabby

    Gav you tricked me! I thought this was going to be an extension of the poetic justice saga!Beautiful as always, but still unhappy.

    • Gav
      Gav

      Well it is an extension, the story of the boy continues :)

      • Charles Ton
        Charles Ton

        Me too, I thought it would once again be about the young fellow learning a lesson on life, the more or less tough way.
        But maybe he’s has learned them now and is more at peace with himself now. Learning to enjoy beauty. (And here comes the sudden self-reflection…. :D )

        I like this one, I like anything happening outdoors in nature… thanks.

      • Moh
        Moh

        Hahah as soon as I saw the first frame, I’m like,’I know that boy!!’ :P <3 Poetic Justice is your best work, gavv :)

  2. Emily
    Emily

    Nice to see a follow up on Poetic Justice boy. :)

  3. Charles Ton
    Charles Ton

    That’s beautiful, you really captured the essence of the poem with your art.
    Nicely done, it takes your mind on a walk through a wood and green fields. It’s bright, it’s somewhat happy, but still subtly catches the melancholy that sometimes swing along with Emily Dickinson. (At least from the little that I’ve read.

  4. Jane Buswell

    One of my favourite poems when I was a child -and that was a long time ago. :-) thank you for reminding me.

  5. T-dawg
    T-dawg

    Lovely! A bit different to your usual style but I like it. The imagery brings to mind the cinematography of Life Of Pi. Also a good book btw- read it when you get a chance!

    • Gav
      Gav

      Well I watched Life of Pi recently so maybe it influenced me subconsciously.

  6. The Code Crimson

    Love this one so very much! Gorgeous bird, and you’ve really captured that moment of flight.

  7. catiechan
    catiechan

    I like the use of perspectives on this one—the fish looking up at the silhouette of the boat…nice!

  8. Edgarin
    Edgarin

    I had to hide during my job to savor the saga. Honestly, I was hoping a thogh, hardcore life lesson. But one must rest and take a break, this is the first time where the kid is relaxed and cool.
    Loved your colors! And I suggest that you read “Success is counted sweetest”

  9. Victor Lopes
    Victor Lopes

    The boy is growing and looks in peace.

    Nice job, Gav

  10. Nick King

    I’m having problems viewing the post, you seem to be using some new plugin, maybe that’s the problem. Also, would be nice to have emails ‘clickable’, for some reason I can’t find the link and have to go to the site directly. Other than that, great work!

  11. Rajiv
    Rajiv

    Rainer Maria Rilke had a beuatiful quote that I think paraphrases this poem quite well – “Let everything happen to you. Beauty and terror. Just keep going. No feeling is final”

  12. Rajiv
    Rajiv

    Rainer Maria Rilke had a beautiful quote that I think paraphrases this poem quite well – “Let everything happen to you. Beauty and terror. Just keep going. No feeling is final”

  13. jit
    jit

    “Splashless” or “plashless”?

    • wolff
      wolff

      “plashless” it is. Dickinson was a bit wild. Poem 328.

  14. Aditi Gupta

    I am a fan of your illustrations and visualization.
    I just loved the bird here and kept staring at my screen for a few minutes.

  15. Neha Jha

    Hey Gav, have always loved the colors that you use in your comics. However, in this particular comics it does justice to the poem! :)
    Cheers!

  16. Darcy,

    Im excited to see what you’ll do for your 100th comic. I hope its Bukowski, but his imagery is hard to capture visually. i always felt that his writing was a lot to be interpretted by the reader.

  17. Dodo
    Dodo

    Hey, I’m a follower of your site since last year. I use it via RSS and Google Reader on my phone. You recently removed the comics from the RSS stream, which I understand makes sense for you to get more ad views. What really annoys me is full screen porn popup ads that can’t be closed that appear while reading the comics. This makes your site basically unusable for me. I’m writing this from my desktop, where I use an adblocker.

    • Gav
      Gav

      Thanks for the info Dodo, I was unaware of this. Is anyone else having problems with inappropriate pop-ups????

      • Jelmer
        Jelmer

        I have no such issues. What I did notice, however, was some flickering in the header when I tried your site in IE (the comic picker combo looks odd in Firefox – so I tried other browsers).

        Probably on his own computer.

        Anyway: next up: #100! Can’t wait :)

        • Gav
          Gav

          Thanks, I’m working on fixing the archive dropdown menu.

      • xanadian
        xanadian

        Unfortunately, if you have a site that runs ads, you will more than likely have ads that do popups. Gone are the days of simple animated GIF banner ads. Now they all use Javascript and Flash to annoy the user to the point that they find addons that block ALL ads and deny the web page host of any revenue.

        F*#@ing Javascript… :/

    • Tyger
      Tyger

      You may want to check your computer for spyware/malware.

      • dodo
        dodo

        Thx for the warning, but it happens on my smartphone, where I’m sure there is no spyware. I think the issue of being not closable has to do with browser campatibility. Ppl using internet explorer should check their pc for spyware :-D

  18. ANMOL
    ANMOL

    Beautifully illustrated! Nice to see this guy again.

    Next Tuesday is the big day! Excited.

  19. Sanjukta Das

    Gav! This touched my heart, and I am so glad you picked a poem like this one :)
    One of my favorites from Emily Dickinson is the one titled “success is counted sweetest by those who never succeed”.
    I would love to see more poems!! Daffodils maybe? :)

    Have a happy adventurous new year :)

  20. Vera
    Vera

    Great work! Can’t wait for next one! :D

    • Samuel
      Samuel

      Great work! Can’t wait for next one!

  21. Rose

    Wow Gav! I love this one. Nice colors and lines. I like how the illustrations feel quiet and a bit melancholy, just like the poem. And great pacing, too. Thanks as always for sharing.

  22. E'lan
    E'lan

    Wow Gav, I think your drawing of the bird is just wonderful. You have it in so many poses. And it looks very natural. I’m curious, did you sit outside and just stare at birds for a long time to accomplish that?

    • Gav
      Gav

      No, Google images!

  23. Robear
    Robear

    Your tree artwork is beautiful. The bold black lines and color choices are reminiscent of Watterson’s work on my all-time fave Calvin & Hobbes. Very well done!

    • Gav
      Gav

      C & H is my all-time favourite too

  24. Morteza
    Morteza

    Hey GAV!

    This was different..Made me think that sometimes the life is simple and I have to take it that way as well! Emily Dickinson…

    PS. I’ve faced the same problem as DODO said, the pop-ups.

  25. drokalok
    drokalok

    Another great piece, Gavin!

    Dickinson was a true American mystic – like Walt Whitman and Ralph Waldo Emerson. That is, she seems to have had a transformative experience/change of consciousness/direct sensation wherein, to quote Alan Watts:

    “You feel…that the whole energy, which expresses itself in the galaxies, is intimate. It is not something to which you are a stranger, but it is that with which you, whatever that is, are intimately bound up. That in your seeing your hearing your talking your thinking your moving, you express that which it is that moves the sun and other stars.”

    She saw the unity of all life through that lens, and was able to express it beautifully. This site highlights some of her work where she references it directly:

    http://www.sol.com.au/kor/13_01.htm

    On a related note, I recently found a site that featured accounts of such experiences – with it having the interesting bent of being dedicated to those “transcendent experiences” had by scientists:

    The Archives of Scientists’ Transcendent Experiences (TASTE)
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=arc&ss=1

    Most interesting (to me, at least) are those instances of “Cosmic Consciousness” (or samadhi/nirvana/etc…) and the effect it had on the experiencer. Here’s my favorite (and the most poetic, IMO):

    My Experience of Cosmic Consciousness
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=expom&id=00004&ss=1

    A few others worth mentioning:

    Humans, the Earth, the Sun and Stars
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=expom&id=00003&ss=1

    Cosmic Consciousness Experience at Age 16
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=expom&id=00067&ss=1

    A Taste of Kensho: London, 1982
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=expom&id=00050&ss=1

    Turn-Around at Delphi
    http://www.issc-taste.org/arc/dbo.cgi?set=expom&id=00013&ss=1

    See also – Falling Awake; Suddenly, the Pervasiveness of Love; and THE DARKNESS OF GOD: A Personal Report on Consciousness Transformation Through an Encounter with Death.

  26. Daniel

    Very nice. Do I see some of Bill Watterson’s influence in your trees? Great color in this one, and well-paced.

  27. sonali
    sonali

    outstanding

  28. AbiFab13
    AbiFab13

    Hi Gav!
    I just wanted to let you know that I cited your illustrated version of this poem in a lesson plan (not with a real class) to help support English Language Learners in learning this poem. Your illustrations provide the perfect amount of support! Love site and your work- keep it up!

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